Feedback on the Main Task video

Liam McDonald- I asked Liam McDonald to watch our film and give me some advice to improve it. Liam said that the film was gripping and the music worked well with it but he felt that at times i seemed a bit like a music video. This meant a change in the music or timing of the music will have to be made

Josh MacKenzie- Josh really liked the film and said he felt it was good but it was let down by a scene where Hannah in the film jumped a bit. Following the advice my group and I edited the part and the jumping no longer happens

Kieran Cresswell- Kieran said the film was OK. Kieran felt that it attracted attention but didn't hold the attention of the audience. This meant that we would have to find a way to keep the audience interested throughout the film. Perhaps by cutting the scenes a bit faster.